i really like the first version with the water color background...its a cool design.
ill be nit picky with my critique, only because i like where its going ;p
it looks like you drew two eyes, the big main one, and then copy pasted the other one 3 times....i would suggest redrawing the other two so that all the eyes are slightly different.
i would like to see the eye colors brighter so they pop more....maybe all of them just a brighter red instead of different colors.
i also think there should be a bit more watercolor background....not so much bigger, but more behind the eyes. just another layer of it. perhaps in a muted red?
other than that, i think its cool and original! good job
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challen14 said about 4 years ago
Bob Kawa said about 4 years ago
people get mad when multiple variations of the same design are posted
that being said theryre both good
but i prefer the other one
challen14 said about 4 years ago
challen14 said about 4 years ago
illdthedj said about 4 years ago
ill be nit picky with my critique, only because i like where its going ;p
it looks like you drew two eyes, the big main one, and then copy pasted the other one 3 times....i would suggest redrawing the other two so that all the eyes are slightly different.
i would like to see the eye colors brighter so they pop more....maybe all of them just a brighter red instead of different colors.
i also think there should be a bit more watercolor background....not so much bigger, but more behind the eyes. just another layer of it. perhaps in a muted red?
other than that, i think its cool and original! good job
challen14 said about 4 years ago