this has been submitted numerous time and really think I'm being a nu sense just for posting it so much on critiques forum and submitting it so damn much. How can I improve it? Where am I wrong? thanks

  • thefERs

    just my 2 cents:

    i think it looks to clean. well at least the circle around her looks to clean... somehow her neck is also a bit squirky, try adding some more of her body to the image, so that it becomes a bit better balanced...

    hope this helped
  • War

    Maybe you should erase that portion of hari below her ear, Erase the circle or make it black, and add the desing like a rainbow color?
  • Keenankoso

    The perspective of the mask is off too. It's facing almost perfectly straight while she's looking away.

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