Yea unfortunately I read it as 'hood of red', which i mistook for a red riding hood reference. Not a bad start though.
The beginning of the L probably shouldn't extend so far through the F and the F itself should be more prominent and balanced better. There's too much space on the left with just swirls, close some of the up or make them smaller to make the letters more prominent and maybe add a counter swirl on the right coming off the D or the underline of the R leg.
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JeffByNight said about 11 months ago
gurven said about 11 months ago
I haven't done a lot of hand done type, I need more practise.
ForWhomTheBellTolls said about 13 months ago
The beginning of the L probably shouldn't extend so far through the F and the F itself should be more prominent and balanced better. There's too much space on the left with just swirls, close some of the up or make them smaller to make the letters more prominent and maybe add a counter swirl on the right coming off the D or the underline of the R leg.
gurven said about 11 months ago
Artbysirb said about 13 months ago