First of all "Fresh Death 2" is how its read. Second, this is a concept that should really be drawn out and not forced with fonts that you picked. They don't go well together and you can absolutely tell that you took googled/stock images for the leaf, headstone and spider. Design doesn't take 10 minutes. A piece is only as strong as its execution and its not helping this one. Definitely try drawing this out instead and make it flow better, you'll only make it better.

Andrew Haines said:First of all "Fresh Death 2" is how its read. Second, this is a concept that should really be drawn out and not forced with fonts that you picked. They don't go well together and you can absolutely tell that you took googled/stock images for the leaf, headstone and spider. Design doesn't take 10 minutes. A piece is only as strong as its execution and its not helping this one. Definitely try drawing this out instead and make it flow better, you'll only make it better.

agreed

although i agree with the above i like the concept behind it