A definition of hip hop tee that i've been working on. I was looking for some critique as to colors, placement, font type and size. Looking for as much constructive criticism as possible :)

UPDATE 2*

~Paul

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    Dyreliv said about 1 year ago

    I think if you moved it up more it would look alot better.. and maybe if you messed around with different typefaces it could look pretty good!

  • Artifact Clothing said about 1 year ago

    So maybe have the text start just above the sleeve cut? And I'll tweek around with the typeface. Thank you for the feedback.

  • Dyreliv said about 1 year ago

    Yeah have it go up a little higher near the sleeve just like you said because if you have ....you know... "thicker" people that wear it .it will bring attention to parts that they might not like especially it being a stomach-ish print... if you get what I'm saying.

    and you're welcome!

  • Artifact Clothing said about 1 year ago

    Thanks much for the help man!! I've updated the version. How's that? I figured I'd move it away from the side and from the lower half in general as it does put focus on certain :unwanted" areas.

  • Artifact Clothing said about 1 year ago

    Ideally, the font will be white on the tee, just for some reason, the template I'm using fades it to make t look more realistic to the shirt

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