Front Pocket Print

you need some order in the 'live to' and 'to live'. they are all over the place. it really is bugging me.
the bottom line is arched on both sides but the top isnt and all the different positions of the letters to me just looks messy.

ThroughTheTrees said:you need some order in the 'live to' and 'to live'. they are all over the place. it really is bugging me.
the bottom line is arched on both sides but the top isnt and all the different positions of the letters to me just looks messy.

Cool story bro.

There isn't suppose to be order, and it's suppose to be 'messy'

good work dude.. so true

Eventhough the saying sucks, the design is great.

Great one dude. Love the subtle cream color you chose!

True words, nice work man.

Why is there like dirt or something on the letters? That just looks messy

i really like this

ShineOn said:Why is there like dirt or something on the letters? That just looks messy

always a fan of your work, nice job!

pocket!

ShineOn said:Why is there like dirt or something on the letters? That just looks messy

lol. Yeah there's also dirt on the background of the close-up image. Makes it look really messy.

Dig it, the pocket image is very Factory records though:)

good stuff man.

Seriously man, learn how to do the arch command in Photoshop. People will think you're an amateur if you keep going like this.

haha this is a funny thread, i can only hope some of these people arent serious.
i love the subtle shifts in the kerning and letter rotation...it gives it a very hand pressed almost woodcut type feel....very good vintage look you really nailed that specific era, also the outside erosion and distress of some of the letters but not all really shows that you pay attention to how a shirt would truly weather if it was an actual vintage piece vintage. NICE

I really love the color