looks real nice man

im not a big fan of the font choice but the overall layout is really nice man

Thanks guys :)

Completely confused about how it reads, but still get it so who cares :-) Heart rocks

cuppatee said:Completely confused about how it reads, but still get it so who cares :-) Heart rocks

Love it.

cuppatee said:Completely confused about how it reads

The layout is confusing me hard but the way the SF heart is, is pretty cool

Agreed, this looks great. I think adding the word "Heart" under "in my" could really tie the design together. Love how you inlayed the bridge within the heart.

I left San Francisco in my

the way the bridge in the heart is makes it look like boobs in a bra

swissarmyshark said:the way the bridge in the heart is makes it look like boobs in a bra

ShineOn said:Agreed, this looks great. I think adding the word "Heart" under "in my" could really tie the design together. Love how you inlayed the bridge within the heart.

Wow! What an awesome bunch of critiques from the dudes I respect most.
Thanks for the critiques everyone. I will rework and repost :0)

cuppatee said:Completely confused about how it reads, but still get it so who cares :-) Heart rocks