and before people get too picky, i'm quite aware of the imperfection in the kerning and typesetting as well as some of the uneven line work and outline...thats part of the look of the design
i think if it was just text and not framed in the bottle, it would be more wearable. The bottle although makes the idea stronger i think its unnecessary. I love this kinda hand drawn style. Give your design space to breath and I think you have a winner!!!!
gotta be honest......i really dont see why my stuff is getting rejected, esecially considering some of the stuff thats approved...Adios!!! and thanks for the input guys will take into consideration the next time
I agree that the size should be smaller, but I think the drawn look works. Ive seen way too many computerized graphics on t shirts, and personally, I would never buy anything of that sort. I like the Human element. Nice work.
I like it as is, if it fitly line I would pick it up... I need killer sticker design right now, something like this would be perfect. I disagree with bleet, I think the bottle makes it. But I am tired of random text shirts. The mock up is a little big, I think the over size print thing has been done to death too, especially on mintees.
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HOWDY365 said about 1 year ago
kirikanan.illustration said about 1 year ago
DanielAndHisArt said about 1 year ago
redo the mock and make the print a tad smaller and more wearable.
bleet said about 1 year ago
HOWDY365 said about 1 year ago
felixpld said about 1 year ago
LeefLabs said about 1 year ago
RRAL said about 1 year ago
RichardClayton said about 1 year ago