This is kind of cool. The kerning on 'DECEIVER' could use a little help. And I'm not really into the yellow shapes beside that word. Fix that and shrink it on the mock a bit and I think you have a real winner!

Awesome, thank you! :)

rad

nice

The only thing that kinda drives me crazy is the difference between the right and left side of the banner, but other than that I really dig it!

There are several spacing issues on this one, I think. I'd make the white circle a bit smaller and the skull stroke thinner. Also, the kerning on 'DECEIVER' is huge, and the spaces between words on the banner could be smaller. That, plus fixing the banner and this would be a pretty solid piece.

Yep, just fix everything up and this will be super rad.

I think it would look better just with the skull and top text. The banner and outside elements ruin it for me personally. Still rules though. Just do not like the outside things.

Thanks for the feedback everyone, I'm gonna go back at it and make some adjustments with the type and evening out the banner like you suggested!

really into this for some reason.

Thanks Dobi!

Cutty. said:The only thing that kinda drives me crazy is the difference between the right and left side of the banner, but other than that I really dig it!

dobi said:really into this for some reason.

I was thinking the same thing.

Thanks so much everyone for the constructive criticism and kind words! Means a lot!

dobi said:really into this for some reason.

Thanks Chad!

yep. looks good

Thanks Migy!

very cool!

Thanks MSTR_CTRL!