loose the white circle around that bottom bell part, it fucks up the bell shape and you don't need it there anyway. kinda looks like a sticker put on top of a drawing of a bell.

I'd also let the top circle go a bit above the bell, and there is too much text, quotes, dates names. it clutters the design. and I have no idea what is important. Millionare tour? the first quote? the second one? that it is a brand?
and you have 2009 in there twice. no need for that.
typography in itself looks good.

dovemans said:loose the white circle around that bottom bell part, it fucks up the bell shape and you don't need it there anyway. kinda looks like a sticker put on top of a drawing of a bell.

I'd also let the top circle go a bit above the bell, and there is too much text, quotes, dates names. it clutters the design. and I have no idea what is important. Millionare tour? the first quote? the second one? that it is a brand?
and you have 2009 in there twice. no need for that.
typography in itself looks good.

agreed, all you need is "the millionaire tour" text and the bell without the white, circle, and the "style and grace" quote, nice piece though.

i would wear this!

thanks guys for the crit, The logo is the round shape with the "the Millionaire Tour" and the concept is to adapt the logo to the design but still keeping separate to the total design.

i agree there might be too much going on, but thought it balances it nicely.
Thanks again

nice work dude! good to see you here.

bleet said:thanks guys for the crit, The logo is the round shape with the "the Millionaire Tour" and the concept is to adapt the logo to the design but still keeping separate to the total design.

i agree there might be too much going on, but thought it balances it nicely.
Thanks again

composition wise it all make sense, no doubt. (except maybe moving that back circle up a bit)
If you had to put all that text in, that is sure the way to do it. Just on the concept level it doesn't make any sense, great composition doesn't make good design, design is also active on the cognitive level.
you probably just need a fresh look on it.

keep at it :)

you killing me man

the type at the top is annoying.
but everything is really cool!

Great job dude.

I love the design of this, but is there a reason why 2009 and The Millionaire Tour are on there twice? Also, this is a new brand yet it is since 2009? Not trying to be a downer, because it looks awesome man, just sayin...

I hate the filled in spots in the type. Looks really cheap.

Design is cool, but that kills it.

Very clean, the fills don't work though..ace job on the composition!