Tried to go all out with this one. Tell me how I can improve.

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  • WillDaBeast



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  • drop

    lol at "NO RIPP"!
  • Joshua Jordan

    Your lighting is really inconsistent. Just pick a light source and stick to it. Getting better though.
  • WillDaBeast

    Shit i see it now, the bridge of the nose isnt right compared to the rest
  • Joshua Jordan

    It's not just that. For instance, you've highlighted the bottom of her cheeks and the top of her brow. The inside of some snakes, but the outer side of others. See what I mean?
  • WillDaBeast

    Yeah i gotcha, ill go back over that.
  • c.G.

    I think it would be great if you spent more time on it, correct your light like joshua said, and I'm not really a fan of the type.
  • WillDaBeast

    I know the type is horrible lol, i dont really know much about typography and that kind of stuff.
  • WillDaBeast

    Updated mock
  • c.G.

    looks better!
  • 1000eyesdesign

    the lighting is still messed up
    the inside of the mouth should be the darkest part
  • WillDaBeast

    Thanks alot! I thought the BTM logo looked better, so i used that instead :)
  • davidcelis

    improved from that one in the comment :) keep it up dude!
  • WillDaBeast

    Thanks so much!

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